Thursday 6 June 2013

My little storyteller

This is written by my little darling ..She is still seven . I thought it is worth to share ..I'm very happy and proud of you my cutie.....Typing this much words it self is a challenge for your age...you are doing very well ..

Sure it has some spelling mistakes that I didn't want to correct..[of course your English is better than mine..]. I want you to walk on your  own  my dear ..You have all the time in the world....

The story of

ponyella

Once a pon a time there lived a

Pony. she was white as snow and her mane was golden as gold her name was Ponyella. The fields where she lived was so green she could play when ever she wanted and could run and graze on the grass all day. One day when Ponyella was grazing in the fields she saw a sign on the gate saying ‘’for rent.’’Then she saw two ugly ponys coming from a truck there names were       Pumkin who was orange as a pumkin and Plump who allways bumps. Ponyella was not frightend at all to meet them she thougt that they were friendly.But they were not at all. Then she got a little bit scared cuz they were starting to get so mean.This is what they said to Ponyella:hi Ponycrybaby laught Pumkin.ya! sniggerd Plump.and they made her plow the fields, push the heavy carts and the new owner made her stay squished in a small cabinet!The next day the princess came to put some posters on the poles of the stable.”Its the pony contest and your not going ponycrybaby” said Pumkin and Plump very rudely.Before they knew it pumkin and plump were dressed and ready to go on a beautiful truk with boquets of flowers on top of it. It glimmerd on to ponyellas eyes so quikly.But then she started to cry...Suddenly a shine came to Ponyellas eyes woosh then she saw a fairy god hores the fairy god horse said ponyella don’t you cry just give me two pumkins and 1 rat ponyella did as she said then she turned the two pumkins into a beautifull truk better than pumkin and plumps then she turned ponyella in to a beautifull pony a pony could ever imagine and after that she turned the rat in to the driver. But then the fairy god horse warend her by 12:oo every thing would change back to normal.When ponyella arrived she saw millions of ponys.But when it was ponyellas turn to do the obsticles shecould do every obstacle even the last one wich was ten feet tall!she even won 1st place it was a dream come true for her when...the clock struk 12 ponyella quikly ran to the fields and closed the door and pretended that she was still grasing in the fields then pumkin and plump came to the fields somehow they started to get kinder heres what they said:”were really sorry for calling you ponycrybaby and teasing you will you forgive us” ofcourse replied ponyella.And they became best friends forever.  The End 

6 comments:

  1. Wonderful!
    Little Bunny will become a great free thinker. She knows how to think out of the box.
    Congratulations on your first effort little darling.

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    1. Thank you Pothgulla ..I will pass the good wishes. Yes she way too out of the box sometimes which make me keep on my toes...D

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